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The Rainbow Brigade.

Post by What!? on Thu Nov 27, 2008 8:55 pm

Another one of my (horrible) poems.

Requested by Haseo.

It may be a continuation to my earlier one. Again, it is Free Verse (or at least attempts to be)

The first of the Pilgrims to reach the land
Numbered eight, all with high hopes and dreams.
'till the third day, did they take part
Becoming the Rainbow Brigade.

The leaders and protectors of this place
Each with their own title
A pirate; A ninja; A "Terror of Death"
One clad in metal and even a Canadian.

All looked up to the First Pilgrim;
The one who was here
The "Sun Godmin"
Following her righteous path for days on end.

"Corrupt!" a few would shout
Though they would agree,
Happily and blissfully.
Did they have any experience at all?

That is a question for them to answer
For we must owe our lives to them
To survive in this strange new land.
The Rainbow Brigade.

This poem felt quite strange writing. You probably wouldn't understand it if you haven't read my earlier one. Quite sorry to Fearless and H_V, as I didn't know where I could fit you in. If you can point out where I can, then I will be happy to edit it.
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Post by Obsessed on Wed Dec 03, 2008 12:08 pm

That is ridiculously epic xDD

I still can't remember how I became a pirate though... but it works >8D

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Re: The Rainbow Brigade.

Post by Graxe on Fri Dec 05, 2008 6:52 pm

This is about the staff, right?
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Re: The Rainbow Brigade.

Post by What!? on Sat Dec 06, 2008 1:21 pm

Graxe wrote:This is about the staff, right?

It's supposed to be.
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