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A Haseo Haiku

Post by Haseo on Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:11 pm

In the cold night air
A black and grey flash comes near
You now fall down, dead

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by What!? on Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:15 pm

Your haiku acknowledges your status as "The Terror of Death".

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by Haseo on Wed Nov 26, 2008 10:17 pm

*nods* That it does.

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by Obsessed on Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:35 am

Seems kind of pointless O___O

You should have done a few more stanzas so it made more sense O:

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by Haseo on Sat Nov 29, 2008 4:53 pm

Obsessed wrote:Seems kind of pointless O___O

You should have done a few more stanzas so it made more sense O:

It wouldn't be a haiku then.

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by Obsessed on Sat Nov 29, 2008 7:53 pm

I thought as long as you kept to the rules of Haiku you could have as many stanzas as you wanted O.O

Ah well, maybe thats just me xD

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by Fayt-Harkwind on Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:20 pm

Obsessed wrote:I thought as long as you kept to the rules of Haiku you could have as many stanzas as you wanted O.O

Ah well, maybe thats just me xD


been watching too much Avatar?

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by zexykupo on Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:32 am

That was a cool! You're good.

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by Obsessed on Mon Dec 01, 2008 12:15 pm

Fayt-Harkwind wrote:
Obsessed wrote:I thought as long as you kept to the rules of Haiku you could have as many stanzas as you wanted O.O

Ah well, maybe thats just me xD


been watching too much Avatar?



Im not allowed to watch that cause my sister hates it... for some reason xD

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by What!? on Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:20 pm

Obsessed wrote:

Im not allowed to watch that cause my sister hates it... for some reason xD


...

Please tell me why your sister hates the greatest, if not one of the greatest American cartoons in the world?

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by advent_of_apocalypse on Tue Dec 02, 2008 6:19 pm

Fayt-Harkwind wrote:
Obsessed wrote:I thought as long as you kept to the rules of Haiku you could have as many stanzas as you wanted O.O

Ah well, maybe thats just me xD


been watching too much Avatar?


That's actually exactly what I was thinking about. O.o

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by Obsessed on Tue Dec 02, 2008 6:37 pm

What!? wrote:
Obsessed wrote:

Im not allowed to watch that cause my sister hates it... for some reason xD


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Please tell me why your sister hates the greatest, if not one of the greatest American cartoons in the world?


ITS NOT AMERICAN! O<

*slaps you* xD

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Re: A Haseo Haiku

Post by What!? on Tue Dec 02, 2008 7:15 pm

Obsessed wrote:
What!? wrote:
Obsessed wrote:

Im not allowed to watch that cause my sister hates it... for some reason xD


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Please tell me why your sister hates the greatest, if not one of the greatest American cartoons in the world?


ITS NOT AMERICAN! O<

*slaps you* xD


Of course it is.

Unless you're talking about another "Avatar: The Last Airbender".

...That is what you are talking about, right?

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